haiku: scatter of sheep…

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scatter of sheep

in the watery meadow

their country faces

 

 

 

 

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One thought on “haiku: scatter of sheep…

  1. haikutec July 2, 2018 / 8:14 pm

    Hi Nick

    As much as I like this:

    scatter of sheep
    in the watery meadow
    their country faces

    I wonder if the unusual power of articles could be switched or avoided?

    e.g.

    a scatter of sheep
    in watery meadows
    our country faces

    or

    the scatter of sheep
    in watery meadows
    country faces

    or

    scattered sheep
    in watery meadows
    our country faces

    Like

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